If you have the time, critique my Introduction and help me get better.
My Evaluation of my Intro: The Cough Fee I went through several takes of my intro so I hope you like it!
Going over my introduction again I liked how open I was towards my audience. My enthusiasm was prevalent towards the end when I began to further explains my hobbies, which makes since since that is what I'm most passionate about. Some areas that I could work on though would be to reduce the lag (or slurring?) of my speech when I'm speaking. Another improvement would be to word my stories better, so as to let the audience understand the point of the subject.
My Goals for the Class: What I want from this class is the ability to explain a concept, whether to a group of people or a single person, without becoming too jittery. Concrete improv, confidence in my information, a clear voice and friendly body-language(depending on the speech) are some goals I wish to improve or learn here at Speech Class.